> "Writing that sounds good is more likely to be right."
1. Inserting new points mid-essay often damages flow because "ideas are tree-shaped and essays are linear" — sometimes requiring endnotes. 2. Shake the bin hard enough and ideas will suffer. The constraint must be moderate. 3. During the essay's own writing, Graham caught repetitive phrasing between paragraphs — the repetition reflected a problem in the underlying ideas, fixed simultaneously.
The carve-out underweights the case. "Method acting" is doing a lot of work. What smooth writing actually tracks is internal consistency, not truth. Good liars don't write as liars — they write as people who have decided. The honest-vs-dishonest axis is the right one, but the gap between consistent and true is much larger in dishonest hands than the essay admits.
The inversion of the conventional view: prose is not a presentation layer you polish at the end; it's an idea-friction detector. If a sentence won't sound right, the sentence is telling you the idea isn't right yet. Applies to code, emails, anything structured. The strongest practical takeaway in the essay.
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